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Songs of an Endling I by ~Sain-Nayuakuioa:iconSain-Nayuakuioa:



I have two books in a nightstand by the window
One contains mistakes and the other glorious conquests
It's only recently that I've noticed for every line written
In the green book,
                  two pages disappear from the white one.
I'm sure its an oversight;
  the white book is getting old after all.
[It's] (Re)bound [to] lo(o)se pages.
A shame, though. I know my family is expecting volume two.
:iconsain-nayuakuioa:

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The only problem I'm having is figuring out which one is green and which one is white . . .

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:iconmoondroplet:
I like this. But it's too deep for me to give sufficient criticism (since I'm not good w/ poetry).

--
"To properly pursue love, we must strive to give it away rather than simply find it." Erwin Raphael McManus
:iconblank-page-emperor:
Quite good! Sorry I didn't get to it sooner. It's missing SOMETHING, but not MUCH of something, because I don't think it should be any longer than it already is.

Could just be my imagination.

Then again, you DID mark this as #1, so...

I'll shuddap and enjoy. ^^

--
Some day, some day, some day-
Dominion!

Come a time...

Some day, some day, some day-
Dominion!

Some say prayers
Some say prayers...

Well, I say mine

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